Not bad for 18 years old!
I don't believe that you wrote this for Cubase! I mean it is a different thing to write for a concert with live orchestra and for computer ( nonlive music ). Well if I compare you with the composers that they are in this site I give 10. If I compare you with the cinematic composers I give you 7. If I compare you with the students composers that they are studying composition around the world I will give you 3. If I compare you with the greatest composers of all time I will give you 0. So the average score is 5! I suggest you to hear more modern composers ( if you like ) like Stravinsky, Bartok, Ligety, Xenakis
I think Simon's review (3 above) pretty much covered everything I would've wanted to say.
It was something!
I like the fact that you don't follow any patterns. You should continue in that direction in order to establish your personal style. You should also listen to others people work (the artist that you like) and steal the things that you like in them. But in any case you should try to do your own things (experimentation will help you a lot!). I suggest you in the next pieces to draw a ''line'' in the piece, to have a direction. For example for one sound to a second and then back to the first. Don't afraid to use sounds that you already used before in the piece. Good luck!
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